On the Drive to a Winter Morning Swim
by Carolin Messier
Lively chatter from the ladies in the front seats
failed to penetrate my haze
as cityscape changed to landscape and back again,
pale noise, foreign sounds
against a monochromatic world while the sun still slept.
White houses, all muted in shadow to dove grey,
charcoal pavement-
both ahead and behind, from driveway, to street, to bridge
mountains, lake, and sky,
each an indiscernible mass draped in pre-dawn darkness.
Thirty minutes of movement through turquoise water
rhythmically and silently,
awakened my mind from foggy depths, evolved its view
from stressful worries
to the vision and opportunity of change.
Outside, the morning’s palette brightened with my thoughts
from stern and sullen grey
to tender shades of icy blue, gold, apricot, and rose;
impressionistic,
these are the hues of hope and possibility.
Both magnificent in their pacific splendor
the mountains stood then
in backlit silhouette, full of solidity and grace
nodding reassurance
at my decision born from feeling and experience.
Invisible crystals in frost-filled air refracted light,
muted edges,
as demure Mount Baker bid good day ‘cross violet glass
to virile Mount Rainier,
they, the duality of vulnerability and strength.
He was bathed in a golden halo full of self-possession,
commanding the horizon.
She wore her pure white robe and swam in watery tones
full of femininity
simply being, needing nothing more to prove her worth.
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Thank you, that is so kind. And thank you for reading.
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beautiful piece. Like a modern day Whitman. Love it
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John,
Thank you, this is high praise indeed. I’m humbled.
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Beautifully crafted imagery, Carolin. You’re inspiring me to try my hand at poetry!
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Thank you Ellen! To inspire you to write yourself is the greatest compliment you could give me. This piece came from an old email I wrote to a friend five years ago describing the morning as I crossed Lake Washington in the back seat of the car as my friends drove us to a favorite pool to do laps in preparation for the triathlon we were all training for. Anything can become a poem; life is full of such beautiful moments.
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Wow.. I mean no matter what you say..either it’s a reply or a full-grown poetry or anything like that.. Every word comes out Soo beautifully from you..you’ve got sucha great talent to describe almost anything… I bet if I dare you to describe a black Wall you will do that also so beautifully and convincingly that I’ll fall in love with that black wall
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