Stacks of pallets, now
deluxe beds for homeless, once
brought phones from China.
There’s a big journey and a powerful story in that little verse 🙂 xx
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Indeed. And we begin to understand it when we open our hearts, resist the urge to look away, and simply say Hello.
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In this poem you use line division expertly to create two meanings and two images with each line.
Thank you! I tend towards lengthy, descriptive passages as a writer. Constructing haiku has taught me how powerful a few lines can.
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